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Hathor
May 27, 2010, 7:29 PM
Naked three embrace as One
Underneath the golden Sun
Of love sublime and warmly tender.
Amanda's body tall and slender
Is penetrated deep inside:
Vaginal sex evokes a sigh
Of moist and fragrant ecstasy,
As she enjoys the joys of Poly.

Peter's penis ejaculates
Inside his precious, darling mate
While Debra sucks Amanda's clit
And Janet kisses Debra's tit
Beneath the blue of Southern sky
On sand that's white and burning dry.

(Copyright 2010 Hathor)

Billys_gurl
May 27, 2010, 7:32 PM
Call it like I read it.... HOT HOT HOT!
I like this, it is beautifullly written.

Hathor
May 27, 2010, 7:46 PM
Call it like I read it.... HOT HOT HOT!
I like this, it is beautifullly written.

Thanks so very much. Your appreciation and kind words mean a lot to me.

Cherokee_Mountaincat
May 27, 2010, 9:40 PM
Good stuff Darlin. Write on! :}
Cat

Nadir
May 28, 2010, 11:19 AM
Really good :) I think it illustrates perfectly the concept of poliamory and what it is all about

FredinSJ
May 28, 2010, 5:42 PM
Great poetry, great ideas for fantasy. How many people have actually BEEN THERE DONE THAT?

Modestly, I have, we have............ yummy!

Nadir, the world is watching you eagerly as you come out and learn!

Best wishes,
FredinSJ in USA

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Hathor
May 29, 2010, 7:07 PM
Good stuff Darlin. Write on! :}
Cat

Cat, your appreciation is much appreciation.

Your Username appeals to me because I'm fascinated by Cherokee, and other Native American, culture, and I just love the cat family of animals, both big and small cats.
I'm also pleased to see a Robert Heinlein quote in your Signature. He's the pioneer of Polyamorous Science Fiction and a favorite author of mine.

Hathor
May 29, 2010, 7:13 PM
Nadir and FredinS, thanks so much for your encouraging comments. You've made my day!