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vicstar
Feb 23, 2010, 5:09 PM
Eons of The World

Ancient One , you gave your children life and love
Ancient One , you cared for us since birth
Ancient One , you took us to your womb in death
Ancient One , you made us what we are
Ancient One , you are what we have made

Little One , You are my child , and love
Little One , You are my hopes and fears
Little One , You will be with me always
Little One , You are what i have made
Little One , You made me what i am

Timeless One , You see All,know all
Timeless One , You all you have recorded
Timeless One , will remain in our lives
Timeless One , foretell us our furture
Timeless One , show us our glories

Silent One , you watched us from the shadows
Silent One , you never interfered in our world
Silent One , you saw all danger and evil
Silent One , you never warned us of there comming
Silent One , you carried on your duty till the end

Travelling One , You moved through this world
Travelling One , You have witnessed great things
Travelling One , You have seen marvels and wonders
Travelling One , You seen the seen the suns final rays
Travelling One , You have seen the moons first light

let us no what u think
xxx :female: xx

Realist
Feb 23, 2010, 7:36 PM
I didn't know anyone wrote poetry any more, Vic! I liked that; thanks for posting it.

Darkside2009
Feb 23, 2010, 8:25 PM
Try poetry it's much easier.

shybipinay
Feb 23, 2010, 8:28 PM
Well done! Thanks for sharing.

vicstar
Feb 23, 2010, 11:46 PM
dark side what u mean try peotry its much easier

thanx guys 4 your replies

peter2010
Mar 5, 2010, 6:47 PM
rest in peace vic xxx

Donkey_burger
Mar 6, 2010, 12:22 AM
Oh, what, so vic died?

DB :bipride:

**Peg**
Mar 6, 2010, 9:37 AM
vic was threatening suicide in the chatroom yesterday Db.

mikey3000
Mar 6, 2010, 11:28 AM
Try poetry it's much easier.

LOL!!!!! Priceless.::bigrin:

Donkey_burger
Mar 6, 2010, 2:58 PM
vic was threatening suicide in the chatroom yesterday Db.

Oh wow. I've battled depression and anxiety since the onset of puberty. I hope vic didn't follow through with his plans. Suicide is the saddest way to die.

DB :bipride: