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Cherokee_Mountaincat
Oct 22, 2009, 11:10 PM
[B][Hansel and Gretel, and the Predators of the Lusty Forest.

Hansel and Gretel skipped down the path towards a lush beautiful
forest towards a Sex Party. They were lost, but determined to not be afraid.
They held hands and sang in the coming darkness trying valiantly to not be
afraid. Gretel wore a short blue shirt with ruffled white panties and
a white shirt that barely contained her sweet, young, plump titties. A red
cape covered her shoulders. White knee socks covered her soft, supple
legs. Black slip on shoes covered her feet.
Hansel wore a white shirt, while suspenders held up the shorts he
wore on his long tanned muscular legs. Both were beautiful to behold.

As they entered the darkness of the forest, neither had any idea that
they were the prey, and they were being carefully stalked....
Hansel said as he looked about a tad nervous, "We had best find a
large tree to sit under for the night. It will be dark soon, too dark
to travel, even when the full moon emerges"

Gretel nodded as she tightly clutched his hand, "I think that's a
good idea. Will you hold me? I'm scared"
He smiled at her bravely and led her to a large tree. They huddled
together as the darkness loomed over them. Hansel held his Gretel
tightly, and then kissed her softly to reassure her. She kissed him back
and soon they were touching each other softly as the Moon began to
rise.

Hansel’s sweet cock began to rise as well with Gretel's soft warm
hand fondling it, and his cum laden balls as well. He fondled her
sweet titties and felt the nipples rising under her flimsy material.
She moaned softly as his fingers found her stiff little clitty. He
moved his fingers in a slow circle making her pussy flow warm honey.
He slipped his index finger under the band of her panties to stroke
ever so gently in and out of her little pussy. She humped against his
probing digit and moaned in lust.

He withdrew his finger and stuck it in his mouth as she watched and
sucked all of her pussy juices off. She groaned, "The moon is so
bright now. I think we can make it to town now. I want a room where
you can eat me until I fill your mouth with my juices, my Love!!"

And he replied, "Yes, I want to lick that pussy until you are sopping
wet, then lick you dry again. Let's go!"
The got up and headed for town, not knowing that town was a long ways
away.
As they walked they anticipated ravishing each other and did not pay
attention that the lush green forest was now different that they were
used to. Gretel saw something move in the darkness ahead of them
like a silent shadow and stopped.
"Hansel...something is out there..." She whispered.

He smiled and said, "It’s probably just a deer my love. Fear not"

And that is when the attack came! Swift, sudden, and silent.
Something grabbed up Gretel's cape and wrapped it around her, taking
her to the ground before she had time to scream.
Hansel too was tackled and taken to the forest floor by something big
and strong. Gretel looked up and could see a figure outlined against
the full cold moon as it sat upon her, holding her down by her
shoulders. She stared in disbelief as a Were Cougar poised there, its
emerald green eyes staring down at her. She was even too afraid to
try and scream.

Hansel was held down by what looked to be a large hairy Wolf-
creature. It was very man-like with bulging muscles, and a broad
hairy chest. It growled deep in its throat, its teeth visible in the
moon light. It sat upon Hansel and then it spoke! It hissed out, "Tell
her!"

The Cougar said in a soft seductive voice, "Lay still and no harm
shall befall either of you. You are our captives, ours to do with as
we shall. Do you understand me, Little Girl?'

Gretel couldn’t look away from those hypnotic orbs and could only nod.
The beautiful Cougar smiled and pulled her into a sitting position up
against a large tree, then tapped the forest floor. Thorn less
tendrils from a Honeysuckle vine began to entwine themselves around
her helpless body, binding her fast, but painlessly. The Cougaress
said, "Be still love child, you will be safe. Watch what we do to
your mate. What are your names?"

Gretel gulped and said, "I, I, am Gretel. He is Hansel…if you
please, Ma'am."

The Cougress nodded at the girl's submissive respect. She was a
little beauty with big brown eyes, brown hair and a luscious, voluptuous body.
And she still had the intoxicating scent of hot pussy on her. It
took all of her restraint to not ravish the girl herself, but that
was her mate’s job...and pleasure.

The Wolf on the other hand was looking over his prey as he held him
fast. Hazel/green eyes, hair shaved body toned and lithe, darkened
by the sun. The Wolf almost drooled. He snarled in lust as the
Cougress joined him. They ripped his clothing off as Gretel sat and
watched in helpless fear. She cried out a little. The duo turned him
over. The Cougress laced her hands on his shoulders, holding him
down. Wolf tapped the ground and more tendrils surrounded the young
man. Wolf ran his hands semi-roughly all over his body, feeling every
inch of the boy. His claws ran over Hansel’s nipples, pert and pink.
The Cougress leaned down and said, "Lay still Youngling, we do not mean you
or your pretty thing over there any harm. You have wandered into Our
Domain, our Forest of Lust, and for that you will pay with your
bodies"

Her body shimmered slightly and she took on slightly more human
features. She had large supple breasts and beautiful Tawny colored
fur on her body. She also had a flat belly that curved down to a
naked pussy. Her tail was long and sensuous.
She leaned down and began to lap at Hansel’s exposed nipples
hungrily, savoring the feel of his tender flesh under her tongue.
Wolf had a hold of Hansel’s cock and had stroked it to hardness,
despite his fear. He bent to lick and suck on Handel’s hard cock,
stroking the entire length with his hot wet tongue. He gripped the
base and jacked his cock as he licked and sucked it down his throat.
He licked off the tiny bit of delicious pre-cum and turned his eyes
toward Gretel, who stared in fascinated horror.

Never had she seen anything like this, she had only sucked that sweet
meat of Hansel's many times before, but had never seen a male do
this. The Wolf wasn’t as bad looking as she first thought. Under the
bright moon glow he was quite handsome; long dark thick hair, his
muscled body was dark and hairy, covered with a blanket of fine dark
fur. He kept looking at her as he suckled and slurped her lover's
cock. Her little pussy began to tingle as if it had a mind of its
own. Her clit throbbed wetly. She could hear Hansel’s audible moans,
too. Obviously he was enjoying the mouth of the Wolf upon his cock.
Wolf raised the boy's leg to the side and licked up Hansel’s tight
ass. Hansel moaned out loudly. Wolf diddled the boy’s ass with the tip
of his tongue as Hansel squirmed in forbidden pleasure. Wolf looked
at his Mate and growled at her lovingly. She moved down to hold
Hansel’s hard quivering cock in her hand. Wolf stood up right and
tore off the remaining visage of pants to revel thick muscular
thighs, and a tight ass. When he turned slightly, they both saw a
beautifully thick long cock! It was at least 10 inches, and the
circumference made Gretel cringe a bit. He was Huge!

Cougress growled out in pleasure and began to mouth fuck Hansel’s cock
hungrily. Wolf watched her as he firmly stroked his big cock. He then
stepped over her body to stand above Hansel. He lowered himself until
he was over the boy's face. Hansel looked at that big cock and
groaned. Wolf growled out, "Suck me, Boy!"

With a groan Hansel took that huge cock head into him mouth, licking
it furiously with Mmmm noises emitting from his own mouth. He licked,
his tongue circling that huge head. He slathered the length of Wolf's
cock with his tongue wetly. Gretel looked on in amazement. She didn’t
even know that he knew how to do that! It fascinated her to watch her
love doing this, and it made her pretty little pierced nipples pop up
in excitement. She squirmed upon the soft grass. The Cougress snarled
out and moved herself up facing away from Wolf and Hansel. She poised
herself over Hansel’s hard cock then thrust her pussy down on it as
hard as she could! She hissed out in pure pleasure as the human cock
slid deep inside her velvety pussy. She bounced up and down on it in
bliss.

She looked toward Gretel and said "Do you do this to his cock, Girl?
Do you ride him too? Do you ever take it and make it Yours? Do you
take domination of this hard man meat and fuck it hard and strong?
Tell meee..."

Gretel’s own pussy was fairly dripping now as she watched the Cougress
practically raping Hansel’s cock, and listened to the sweet swampy
sounds of a pussy being fucked hard.

"Y, y, yess, Ma'am. I do sometimes" she stammered as she clenched and
released her own pussy muscles. It felt so good on her tiny clitty.

The Cougress lay her head back in pleasure and closed her eyes, then
said, "Does he fill your tiny pussy up, Little One, when
you fuck him this way?"

Gretel licked her dry lips and said, "Yes, he's so good in my pussy,
so hot and hard" She practically panted.

The Cougress began to ride Hansel’s cock harder now, gyrating her
body, fucking him hard, her clit being rubbed so hard on Hansel’s
pubic hair. Her moan was loud in the forest, and a minute later she
screamed out loud and long as her orgasm raced through her pussy. She
covered his cock with her magical essence. At hearing this, the Wolf
pulled his cock out of Hansel’s mouth. The boy was so euphoric in
his sucking that Wolf Could have finished in his mouth, shooting his
cream down the back of the human's throat, but he had other ideas.
Cougress moved off of Hansel’s cock with one last lick to his now
girl-cum covered cock. She stood and kissed her mate, sharing the
essence of her pussy with him. Hansel lay panting there, his cock
still hard and throbbing. Wolf reached down and turned the boy over,
biding him to get on his knees. Hansel groaned out and assumed the
position eagerly as the vines let him move. Wolf looked over at
Gretel and grinned.

He licked the boy's ass wetly, coating his man hole with spit. He had
the Cougress guide his huge cock over to Hansel's ass when he went to
his mighty knees.
Wolf rubbed his cock head up and down over Hansel’s ass. Cougress
looked on in pleasure. She said "Do it baby, take that sweet human
ass! Do it for me! I want to see you take him. Ride him so I can see
you spearing his little ass, My Love!"

She then moved over to the girl who still sat disbelieving what she
was seeing. Cougress told her, "Lean over so I can get behind you.
We shall watch this together"

Gretel moved over and much to her surprise, the larger Cougress pulled
her over on top of her! Gretel was laying on her soft body, her large soft
titties pressing into her back. Her fur was soft as silk on Gretel's
thighs. It was like reclining on a satiny fur blanket. She laid her head
back on the Congress’s shoulder comfortably as she watched the
incredibly erotic scene in front of them.

Her voice in Gretel's ear was low and hypnotic, "See what he is doing
to your precious Hansel? See how big that cock is? Would you like to
See that big cock head go inside his tiny ass?"

Gretel closed her eyes for a moment, then she moaned out "Oh God…yes"

That's all Wolf needed. He pressed forward and that huge bulbous head
slowly sank into the boy’s tight asshole. Hansel groaned out, but not
in pain. The cock Should have hurt but instead it afforded great
pleasure!
He moved his ass upwards as that huge head slipped in further and
further. Gretel wondered how he took the thickness of that cock in
his ass that way.
As if reading her thoughts the Cougress cooed soothingly, “We cause
no pain, only pleasure and Joy, Baby girl. You will see soon"

They turned their eyes to the two males in front of them, barely
seven feet away. Gretel could clearly see the Wolf's cock flowing in
and out of her love's ass. It looked like it stretched out Hansel’s
ass as it smoothly slid in deeper and deeper. His had his head on his
arms enjoying the feel of such a big member up inside of him. He had
wanted this all of his life, but had never dared realize his dreams.
He looked toward Gretel, expecting to see that she was in revulsion,
but instead he saw that she was fondling the front of her ruffled
panties in excitement. She saw Hansel being fucked in the ass so hard
now and she nearly came hard just from watching. He grinned at her
in pleasure as his orgasm neared. He lifted up on his hands and bent
his ass backward to take the whole length of the wolf's powerful
cock. Wolf growled out in pleasure and grasped the boy's hips
tighter. Gretel heard Cougress’ voice, "Fuck him my Love! Take that
tight ass, fuck it for me. Do it nowww"

Gretel cried out as a small orgasm ripped through her tiny pussy.
Hansel yelled out as Wolf began pounding him now. His cock spurt
ropes of thick hot cum upon the ground as he came all over the grass.
Wolf let him finish then eased his hard meat out of the boy’s
clutching ass. He reached down and touched the vines, releasing their
hold. Wolf pulled the boy over to where the females lay. He
commanded, "Be a good boy, and watch me take your female"

Hansel was too weak with bliss to protest. Cougress reached over to
pull him closer to them. Hansel kissed his lady and lay panting
beside them. Gretel looked up in fear as Wolf went to his knees in
front of her. He dipped his head down and bit into the crotch of her
panties, ripping them away with his fangs! She cried out in fear,
but Hansel said, "Fear not my Love. I understand them now. Just
relax, just experience it!"

Wolf licked all up and down her tiny pussy, twiddling the labia rings
in Gretel's pussy lips. He suckled and nibbled on her pussy lips,
sucking then into his mouth as she sighed in happiness, and lapped out
all of her cunt-juice. She cried out in pleasure as she squirmed on
the Cougress' lap. She didn’t see Hansel’s left hand reach under them
to slip 2 fingers into the Cougress' wet pussy. Cougress groaned out
as he pumped his fingers in and out. He leaned over to take her left
nipple into his mouth to suck it like a child. She growled and purred
in pleasure. Her hands came up and cupped Gretel’s big soft titties and she kneaded those hefty globes.

In the meantime, Wolf rose up and rubbed his cock head up and down
her pussy, just like he had down to Hansel’s asshole. She moaned when
he hit her tortured clitty. He grinned and moved forward, slipping
that head inside of her pussy. She stiffened for a moment expecting
pain, but there was only pleasure!
Wolf grabbed he tender titties and molded them in his big hairy
hands. He thumbed those pointy little nips semi-roughly. He moved
forward and that cock sank in deeper. It stretched her little pussy
out as he moved in to impale her on his huge meat. She gripped him
with her pussy muscles as he began to fuck her. He leaned his huge
hands against the tree and looked down into his mate's eyes. She
gazed back in passion and in love. She said, "Fuck her baby. Make her
little pussy sing. Make it cum all over your cock for me."

She reached down with her right hand and pulled open the girl's leg
further. A second later Hansel pulled open Gretel's left leg so that
Wolf would have Total access. He reached over with his right hand to
stroke her little clitty making her almost yell in rapture. "That
feels good, doesn’t it baby? He has such a marvelous cock: So thick
and big...so hot. Cum on it my Gretel, cover his big fucking cock for
me…do it my Love!"

And with that she did! She screamed out and gushed cum all over his
meat. She could not cease cumming, and came over and over again,
harder and harder each time she did.
He snarled out as his Cougress began to cum from Hansel’s finger
fucking. He drove into Gretel's pussy hard as he could; mashing her
up and down on the Congress’s big titties. He loved seeing both
females under him this way. He pumped her pussy Full of his hot white
cum as he howled out his pleasure to all who dared to hear, be it
human or animal kind.
When he squirted out the last of his milk into her little pussy, He
yanked out to grab Hansel and pulled him over to Gretel's pussy. He
leaned down and said, "Eat her pussy, my friend. Lick clean all of my
cum. Swallow every drop and miss none. I will know. Stab your tongue
deeeppp inside and scoop it all out, the kiss her deep and strong and
share it with her. Do it now"

Hansel didn’t have to be told twice! He practically Dove into her
pussy. His mouth licked, sucked and he thrust his fingers in as deep
as he could into her little gash. He ate until he heard her cry
out "I'm going to cum My Love!!'
He rose up and thrust his hard again cock into her forcefully and
began to fuck her hard. The Cougress pushed Gretel's legs up around
his waist and whispered in Gretel's ear "Fuck him baby, fuck him
hard. Take his cock into the depths of your little pussy. Feel the
grind, feel the friction? Feel his hot meat delving inside of
you…doo it, fuck him Sweet baby, fuck him harrrddd"

Gretel yelled out and began fucking up on her love like she had never
before. Soon they were fucking like dogs gone mad and both of them
clawed and bit and scratched each other. Just as they both began to
orgasm together, Father Sun poked his head up over the mountain
behind them, covering them in his rich light.
The two lovers screamed out and orgasmed harder then either ever had!
It was so hard and intense that they both passed out....As they began
to fall into the darkness of lustful passion they heard the howl of
the Wolf, and the scream of the Cougress.............................

Later Gretel was the first to awaken. The birds chirped in the trees,
and little animals scampered about. She giggled to see that they lay
upon her cape, naked. Hansel roused when she snuggled in and kissed
him good morning. They looked at each other shyly for a moment then,
they giggled. Hansel said "I figured out what was happening. They
were creatures of Lust. They only come out during the Full Moon and
look for human's that come into their realm. They are lovers just
like us. They give pleasure and get it as well. It wasn’t going to
hurt, it was for pure adulterated pleasure my love. I'd never have
been able to take a cock that large otherwise"
She sighed happily and said, "Well...we will have to CUM this way
again sometime"
He laughed and kissed her deep and hard and felt his cock hardening
under him...
But That's another story entirely....;)
TLK 2008
/B]

roy m cox
Oct 22, 2009, 11:29 PM
"ow" this is a good one thx cat :bigrin:

grate story loved it :flag4:

Long Duck Dong
Oct 22, 2009, 11:32 PM
very well written, and most pleasurable to read...... thank you for sharing

dickhand
Oct 23, 2009, 6:34 AM
Nice story but why two shirts ?

lolguy
Oct 23, 2009, 10:47 AM
DAMN....that made me pull out my stuff and have a go.....very erotic...thanks:bigrin:

rissababynta
Oct 23, 2009, 10:54 AM
DAMN....that made me pull out my stuff and have a go.....very erotic...thanks:bigrin:

LOL apparently everyone liked it cat haha.

Indaco76
Oct 23, 2009, 11:08 AM
That was absolutely brilliant, Cat!
Very well written and erotic.
Kudos!

PS: I want more!! :-)

FalconAngel
Oct 23, 2009, 12:52 PM
Very good story.

It needs some minor tweaking (editing, grammar, etc.), but still one hot tale of furry fun.

If you decide to self publish this and other stories that you write like it, then I suggest doing it as a series of graphic short stories. If you do that, then I know the artist to do the art for you; http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Grrrwolfartlist/ , http://furholt.net/grrrwolf/main.htm , http://furholt.net/grrrwolf/group/SlayingTheDragon.jpg

Cherokee_Mountaincat
Oct 23, 2009, 3:42 PM
lol Thank you Guys and ladies. I wrote that for a couple last year and wrote it as they wished it done. :} It was mainly for their erotic viewpoints.
And ty Falcon for the hints. I do have an erotic series based loosely on the goings on in one of the Lifestyle groups that I attend. :}
Glad you like ya'll and TY to the young man who said he had to "Take things out" and have a go..lol
Thats a great compliment to a writer: When the words are so clear that it causes an emotion or reaction to the story. :}
Thank you for that Darlin...glad you enjoyed..LOL
Cat :bigrin:

Realist
Oct 23, 2009, 4:38 PM
Whoa! Halloween will never be the same again!

Nadir
Oct 23, 2009, 4:44 PM
This one was great! Beautifully written and I think it was one of the most erotic tales that I have read in a while. You are really very talented :) I hope you don´t mind if I decide to look some other stories written by you. Keep up the good work! :)

still_shy
Oct 24, 2009, 9:22 AM
Cat, you little devil! You've been keeping your talents hidden from us....What an awesome story darlin! I enjoyed it immensely and would love to read some more from you! I am curious to see how you write about f/f and wait anxiously for more!!:bibounce:

mountaincat
Oct 24, 2009, 9:42 AM
Whoa C-Cat! Awesome. I so loved that. Oh. Oh. Great, great story, thank you. :bigrin:

surfviper
Oct 24, 2009, 2:20 PM
I have to say that I liked this post as well. Thanks, Cat, for posting it!