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Sean-Templar
Jul 8, 2009, 1:08 PM
I thought I found you several times,
Near misses at best you see.
The more I try to find you babe,
The less you seem to be.
It seems when I stop the search,
You’re knocking at my door.
But when’s it going to be the real you,
Or are you just some whore.
You’ve beat me and you’ve bruised me,
Left me bloody and for dead,
But babe just give me one more shot,
And thee I surely do wed.

To Love
By Sean-Templar

TwylaTwobits
Jul 8, 2009, 7:58 PM
interesting poem, not sure whether to say good luck or good hunting. Love can find you in the oddest of places yet can be an elusive flame when we search for it.

Thanks for sharing

Sean-Templar
Jul 16, 2009, 1:33 PM
Elusive flame?! I like that, I will have to find a way to use that somehow in my next poem. Thanx for your words, I like it too, the more you read it the better it gets. (I think, anyhow!)

Realist
Jul 16, 2009, 6:24 PM
It seems the best relationships I've had fell out of the sky, when I least expected it. Keep on trying, though, you never know what'll turn up!

rissababynta
Jul 16, 2009, 7:19 PM
It seems the best relationships I've had fell out of the sky, when I least expected it. Keep on trying, though, you never know what'll turn up!

So true, and not only do they fall out of the sky but you tend not to realize how great they are til you really sit back and think about it righ?