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katieshay
May 18, 2008, 1:39 PM
Read the description, buy, and enjoy!!

http://www.lulu.com/content/2540015

void()
May 18, 2008, 8:48 PM
Way to go! It's good you got a book written, revised and out there. That requires courage, skill and determination.

Only read the first three to four pages in the preview. Doesn't appear to be a novel I'd buy to read. There was no opening attention grabber, or conflict.

This is not intended as harsh criticism. It's merely an honest opinion of what little was read. I'd read more but, the writing needs to hook me in about a paragraph. This novel didn't do that.

Continue writing at all costs! Do not be discouraged. Others will probably read this novel, lots of them I hope, too. :)