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Tx46M
Apr 14, 2007, 9:28 PM
If anybody is interested check it out.
http://www.stickypen.com/Stories/Straight_Guy/Daves-Surprise-Part-1_1717
Parts 2,3,4, & 5 follow
Tx46M
FalconAngel
Apr 14, 2007, 10:08 PM
Read the story and it wasn't bad. I'll have to post one of mine sometime.
codybear3
Apr 14, 2007, 10:26 PM
Pretty good read, TX46M...Keep it going...Gotta go register on stickypen to keep on top of your stories... :paw: :paw:
12voltman59
Apr 14, 2007, 10:50 PM
Good Story
I have posted such stories at another site:
http://www.freegaypix.com/stories/article.php/20070302145809888
http://www.freegaypix.com/stories/article.php/20070302150147438
http://www.freegaypix.com/stories/article.php/20070302150503125
Herbwoman39
Apr 14, 2007, 11:23 PM
The story's not bad. It's a little Penthouse Forum-ish if you get my meaning. Try working in a little more detail about the surroundings, etc.
ambi53mm
Apr 15, 2007, 8:06 AM
Now that's a Texas-hold em I could relate to :tong:
Easy to read and very erotic! I'd have to give 3 wanks and 2 cocks up.
Funny thing about writing erotica is that I get so turned on that I spend as much time wankin' as I do writin'
Great job Tx
Ambi :)